I was once told every time the ball is carried, it is a risk of dropping it.. that is the way life is we run that risk of beliving what we hear, confront before conviction = clear conscious... Good writting... I'm giving you a 5

You've got the right idea. Try cleaning up your flow. Keep it up

This was good, very different then other poems I've read on freindship. I like the way you use words to try to make new meanings out of it, very original and I enjoyed reading this poem, although it was short, it had good emotion to it. great job on this poem.

You're writing style is diffrent but very good , your poems are so great i red 2 of them and both froze my mind :)
another deserved 5/5

~StefQ

Different writing style and a different sort of poem. Did I miss what the one word was ordid you not say it :)

This will sound stupid but what was the word?
I liked this one.
Improvments: Maybe using stanzas and some form of punctuation to really give it some umph!

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