This poem makes me think of homeless people. I like the images, and universal meaning. I don't know if that was intentional or not, but many people can find multible means. good job.

Love your work as well... I have a teachable spirit, and I can take criticism.(smiling) speaking of the last line in the poem "why hate me" . keep up the flow...

I really like this. its got something i cant exactly state. the use of words is great. its makes it stretch and stand out. thats what i like about it. great write.