You use the word snow a lot.... but I really liked your poem. good job. Not one of the best I've read but if you keep working at it, you'll only get better. Good job. 5/5

I agree with Reiko - you could have cut down on the word snow - it made the poem a little harder to read and it ruined the flow considerably. However - the imagery and the happiness within the poem makes up for and more the previous error :) Nice write!

Peace. [Sole]

Personally i dont think this is one of your best but its still good:)

Love
Jacs
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A lot of snow then. it was a good analogy. well done x

Good winter poem

Bring footballs and basketballs

now thats what I'm talking about :). a great poem, and i really agree with it. the whole bit about the earth being brought back from death really got me too. keep up the good work