Silver tears(Villanelle)

Aww. this poem makes me sad. but it's really good.

p.s. thanks for the comments/contest!

I loved how you switched on and off with the repetition of the last sentence on every stanza. It was very creative and the way you combined the last to repetitions at the end of the poem was very awesome! I've never seen a poem like it! A one of a kind write!

Hey, thanks for reading my poem and giving it a chance even though it wasn't really the type of poems you like. Thank you for also for speaking so highly of it, I was flattered. I liked your tear imagery here and your repetition of "what's the point of even trying?" A emotional poem that was written with great feeling.

-Tainted Mikochan

I totaly agree with christopher
it flowed very naturally and i loved the repeating line , trule amazing poem :)

5/5

~StefQ

Beautiful sad penned.. It's strange that darkened children need forgiveness, For evil that they suffer, innocent. But guilt's the trademark of humiliation, Burned into the flesh of memory. have a good day, thanks for the nice comment you left.....

gloria's glen.