I think it's great like this. I love the idea of how one human life depends solely on how another feels about them. It's so sad because that's the way it truly is sometimes. Remarkable piece, Brad!

Oh my god, I loved this poem. Love can either make your life or take your life. Wonderfully written and full of emotions. Great job.

I loved it Peter.sometimes love devastates.

keep it up,
wishes

Fantastic poem def got my 5 vote keep writing and take care sarah.

It is a good poem. I'm not to big on the love thing for that reason, the girl was just cruel. but you got the feelings of love and hope out there, I felt like I was sort of there you know looking through the authors eyes.

When I vote for something, and give it an (excellent), it is because it truely is. i loved this poem, from the begining, till the last stanza, i had no idea which direction you were going to take this, and i love the path you chose for it. absolutly fantastic work.
Ben