Take in all the moments that have happened.
Its like I invite, only the blackened.
Then I exhale, and all my dreams disappear.
Away happiness, welcoming the fear.

best Best Best Stanza..I love the whole Poem But that Stanza was Just amazing and spoke to me..like none other stanza has...Amazing job
5/5
thanks for al the help
~TPOMH~

Sadly i dont think that was me and god this is getting to hard so whats ur display name on myspace or whats ur url and good poem i like it

Wow, I hope whoever this is dedicated to or whoever you wrote this too can't look at themselfs in the mirror in the morning because That's one hell of a poem

Great Job
Mia