I liked it.. good job... rate my poems tooo!!!

Argh!!! *runs away* very scary, and definately a 'dark' one!!!! brilliantly written, and very morbid!!!

Uhm... wow! i was... not, expecting that. uhm.. jeeeees. it was good. the rhyms were good. and the flow was good. but definitally wasnt expecting that. i think its good. a little twisted. but good.

keep it up, you deffinitally have tallent.