OMG I LOVE THIS!! its great poem, so much talent and emotion and just everything! if u ever need to talk im here, please comment on some of my poems it would mean a lot
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Wow nice.

I loved it. Keep up the good work.

Wow....that was an amazing poem...i loved it...nice flow...great job...
Emma 5/5

Nice poem keep up the good work

Great Flow
Great Words
Great Descriptions
I haven't found a poem I could find a feeling from in a while so this was a refreshing read.

Finally I'm released away
From igonizing fears
Finally I can dream in peace
Hidden from nightmares.

That was my favorite part of your poem. This poem has a great flow, which kept me interesting on what you were going to write next. I loved how you put good description in your poem without adding too many words. this was a good poem and i enjoyed reading it, although i'm not really into the dark poems, i liked this one.

Wow, this poem was really brillant love! Holy crap I loved it. You write with a great use of vocabulary, excellent flow and a powerful passion. I give you any higher compelement than that. You are a gifted writer and I look forward to reading more of your work!

-Tainted Mikochan

Great job i'm 15 too pleease read my poems and tell me your opinon my pillow of tears and our little secret keep up the good work

Wow it was soo deep and personal. i only hope u keep going with such a good talent as that. keep growing with your poetry.

Hope to see you in a book
~Tru Life Poet~

Wow, this poem was really sad :(
"igonizing " is it supposed to be ag? Or is that just me...
I like the last two lines and the contrast of dreams and nightmares that is displays
Infact the last two lines of every stanza seemed to stand out
WELL DONE :)

Oh wow wow wow! I loved this poem! OMG...it was absolutely perfect. I can't even begin to say how much I liked this. Probably the best I have read today and in a while. You are definately taking a place upon my favorites now. Keep it up! 5/5

Woh! That was awesome! I really liked it! You have talent ! Keep it up! 5/5

p.s I like the picture for your profile I luv anime!
-cheers- ^_^

Hey, gr8 poem. so much detailing and emotion, loveed it. thnx so much for enterin my contest!
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My heart goes out to you, another beauty.

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