Pictures of what it used to be

by Bloomed Rose   Mar 22, 2006


We used to tour the whole mall
Walk our dogs side by side
Talk all day on the phone
But we let these things slide

Our distance between us
Grew longer each day
For the silliest reasons
Like what we didn't mean to say

Look at us now,
Torn apart by fights
Letting wants get between us
Like a long, blackened night

If only we'd know
That this would happen
Our friendship is now weak
Like a balloon that is flattened

If I could go back
I'd change one detail
I'd look at life differently
To always write an email

I'd try to keep in touch
As often as I could
I'd bring you soup if you were sick
Only now if I could

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Excellent poem! I can relate, I know how this feels. Good job once again. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark_shadow0890

    Call them tell them your sorry just dont give up unless their dead good poem i liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by bmichelle

    Way awesome hannah!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kay

    This is great! Keep up the good work. : )

  • 18 years ago

    by angel125

    Hey thanks for the comment and stuff yeah im trying to work it all out but it just seems to get worse but i try to think of other things so my mind wont be fixed on that

More Poems By Bloomed Rose