Laying her life on the blade of a knife

by SilentTearDrops   Mar 22, 2006


Her face was drenched in tears.
she couldnt take it anymore. she had to get away from her fears.

her eyes darkened as moments passed.
she knew her life wasnt meant to last

copeing through a knife
now everyone knows thats not the right life

the endless tears she cried
the moments and plans of a painful suicide.

her life just cant go on
no one cares, so through the knife, she will lay upon.

*i wrote this in like a few minutes..when i was actually feeling so suicidal it was crazy, but yet words came clear to my head at this state of mind. .its not completely done...but im almost there

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  • 18 years ago

    by cassie

    This is a really good poem, i can feel the emotion in it, it brought a tear to my eye, please comment on some of mine, it will be greatly appreciated, and if u ever need to talk im here
    love cass xoxo