Comments : R.I.P

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    This is a sad poem but also cool how it all made sence
    loved the poem =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a great piece of work. a deep yet sad poem. and i loved it.

    My Bed Is Stained
    In Red So Pure
    My Face Is So Wet
    With Every Tear

    i really liked that stanza. especially the last two lines. you did an amazing job. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I love the whole poem but yet like the others very sad... amazing poem..
    i love it =)