by Kaely Mar 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I had a fight with Lana again, |
by EJ
Hey umm just a little tip not all poems have to rhyme.. i think this one would have been better if you wouldnt have forced the rhyme so much.. but yeah it was good other than that.. and if the story was true i'm sorry for your loss.. bye bye EJ |
by sarah
Great poem soz for your loss if this did happen keep writing and take care hun sarah x |