Comments : Friends

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Great poem soz for your loss if this did happen keep writing and take care hun sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey umm just a little tip not all poems have to rhyme.. i think this one would have been better if you wouldnt have forced the rhyme so much.. but yeah it was good other than that.. and if the story was true i'm sorry for your loss.. bye bye EJ