What Could have Been. . .

by holly   Mar 22, 2006


I've No Regrets,
I Love It Here,
My Friends, My School, My Home,
But When I Hear From You,
And Here What Fun You Have,
I Think About The Could Have Beens,
And The Would Have Beens,
And Wish I Had Been There Too...

*** this isnt very good but i just wanted to put into words how much i miss my friends from my old school hadnt realised it till i spoke to one of them and there were all these things id miised out on. . .***

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Hmm. This is sad. I can relate alot though. I don't see my friends often anymore, And it tears me apart. Lovely poem hun. It was great! 5/5

    .x.TaLeEe.x.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    It's short but clear with a powerfully expressed meaning within. i do not see any really problem with capitalising every word, it doen't affect the poem in any negitive way at all and at the end of the day it is your choise how you present your own work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I liked it.. I like that its more of a freestyle poem.. You did a good job of espressing your feelings in it.. keep up the good work..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Brett

    I think it is good.. and people need to lay off you about the whole capital thing... it's ur choice =) well anyways nice job

  • 18 years ago

    by StefQ

    This poem doesn't rhyme or isn't very long but it has a very good meaning, i know just how you feel and better times will come 5/5

    ~StefQ

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