Hahahah I love this poem. So nice written. I really loved it. I always wondered, can I great poem, be a great poem, when it's basically about nothing?
You proved it to me. It can be brilliant. Haha, you described it so beautiful. I felt sorry for you that it snapped!

Haha, well done sweety, I loved your poem

Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

That is really good

Omg how can a poem about a pencil be soo good !!
well done i really enjoyed reading that !!

Add jamie to your favs....plz
~Emma

PENCIL PENCIL PENCIL!!!!!
I love your poems, espeacially the abstract ones about random importances in our lives, aka dreamcatcher
~Emma

HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Pencil....oh god....i need that!!!!
lol, you should get that.

Matt

Lol great. a very nice poem. the imagry was fantastic. loved it!

by the way, you you usually write your poems by hand, or on computer?

Ruby

OMFG that waz...amazing...who knew a story can be funny wIth the descriptions in it ^.^
*claps* BRAVA BRAVA

Lol, great poem, well written and still funny :) .
Thanks for commenting on my poems, it means a lot coming from a great writer like yourself :D.

Wow, having a little spout of boredness when you wrote this poem love? lol. I was funny, and really needed a laugh so thanks for posting this. I am an artist as well, so that just made the poem all the funnier.

-Tainted Mikochan

This one was really funny. I don't think that I could write anything like this. I really like your poetry. You are really talented. 5/5

It was really good, made me smile and was really truthful too. Like you were talking to the pencil as a friend, imaginative and unique.
well done
love Tara-Kay

Aww that's such a sweet poem! I had the vision of a little girl writing it with her pencil, then her big sister coming along, snapping the pencil in half, then finishing the last stanza with her pen!

Peace. [Sole]

Haha. I really love this poem! I pictured it all in my head! it was really creative. It made me giggle.

kat

Lol dats a funny/love poem

Ha, I shed a tear in rememberance of your sweet pencil. It sounds as though you shared some powerful memories. lol. I recomend loss counseling and a very large chocolate bar, lol. This was a great poem, thanks for sharing it, I got a brilliant laugh from it.

-Tainted

Hah. This was cute. Besides the last line that made me smile, it was excellent. I liked how you described the pencil, and then came down to a tragic, but funny, ending. And now I know 'Coz' is a word. I always learn things when I do not expect it, ^.^

That's original. I've never read a poem about a penicil before.

It's really good, i love it. It's funny too.

Good Poem Suz

xoxo