by PURE HEART
Nice msg thru this poem lol! nice write |
People need to stop with all this down voting, i think its unfair :( it was good too :( |
by Natalie
This was good aswell. Great way to tell someone to get over someone lol. It really was a good poem. Keep writing, Im enjoying reading your poetry! 5/5 for this one =] |
by holly
I dont mind if people down vote but id rather they explained why so i could improve but thanks for you comments ...xx ALLYxx |
by Jenny
Great poem, is the last line meant to read 'your hurting too many people in you(r) stalking game!' I dunno wether you want the you to be your or not but I thought I'd say it anyway, cool poem I could almost feel the anger. eep up the good work. |
by azlan26
So much passion/anger in this poem - felt like thought running onto paper |
by Ben
This was good, thanks for commenting on mine tho =D much appreciated. for some reason, this poem made me laugh, mabe the way u phrased ur words, i dunno, great write tho |
That was really good 5/5 |
by *~vixen~*
This one was funny for some reason so i give it a 5/5. :) |
Hey I liked it, keep it up :) |
by Fallen~Tears
Good poem.. I liked it.. My friend at one time had this problem but now she wants him back go figure? well good job.. |
WOw what intensity..niicely put..VRY VRY niice poem..love it. I love ur style and i love all ur pomes...keep it up |
Very funny....in your face...loud and proud...I luv the way you still managed to rhyme this really well too... |
Wow. im just guessing but sum1 cant get over sum1. lol. anyway wow amazing work. very emotional i could tell. 5/5 |