You Know

by Eduardo Serrano   Mar 22, 2006


You know you're all I think about
You know only you can calm me down
You know you drive me wild
And only you can make it right when you're around.
You know you're the reason I smile
You know how to cheer me when I'm down
You know you make my heart pound
Because with you time slows down.
You know how I feel about you
You know I'll never leave you
You know I love you
And I'll forever be with you till I grow old.
You know I want you
You know you're what I need
You know I need you here with me
But did you know that in your heart I'll always be?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    I love this poem it so true with love, not only that it so sweet, you know I'm a fan...............XJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    I like this poem. It's wonderfully written. Well done. I'm impressed.

    Just a little bit critic, I hope you don't mind, and I hope I'm not offending you.
    You repeat "You know" In every phrase. It might be a little too much.

    For example;
    You know
    You're all I think about
    Only you can calm me down
    You drive me wild
    etc etc.

    It might look a little bit better? It's just a suggestion =) I'm not trying to be rude or anything =)

    I love your work alot!
    Keep it up! Keep writing, I would love to read more!

    Lotsaaaaa love
    -xxx-

    Ps; Check out the club's forums and events! I would love to talk with you there =)