I like this poem. It's wonderfully written. Well done. I'm impressed.

Just a little bit critic, I hope you don't mind, and I hope I'm not offending you.
You repeat "You know" In every phrase. It might be a little too much.

For example;
You know
You're all I think about
Only you can calm me down
You drive me wild
etc etc.

It might look a little bit better? It's just a suggestion =) I'm not trying to be rude or anything =)

I love your work alot!
Keep it up! Keep writing, I would love to read more!

Lotsaaaaa love
-xxx-

Ps; Check out the club's forums and events! I would love to talk with you there =)

I love this poem it so true with love, not only that it so sweet, you know I'm a fan...............XJ