Great poem keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Hey Kaylee!

A very realistic write, and it happens in every school across the world to some unfortunate soul. I know the feeling first hand too, it's not the best place to be.
I think it was written well and the flow was fluent so well done on that.
Third stanza, first line I think you meant "my."
Not too sure I understood the meaning of the second line of the second stanza, but I guess it means something to you.
A personal and saddening write. Well done.

I too know the feeling, not the best I'll agree - but your poem was :) Again (I hate to repeat myself) But you have used a topic that so many can relate to - which personalizes the poem for each individual :) Great write!

Peace. [Sole]

Hey this reminds me of they way i used to feel. i really like it

It is good to write about what you know.. you always end up asking and answering your ownself while others continue to being about slander.. they are weak and you are strong..

Let me share a poem with you it is called "why hate me"... been there..... keep up the good work...

This ones really good too. And its true, No matter where you are, Or who your around, There will always be a rumour that will go around about you. I hate rumours lol. But this was a great poem. You wrote it really well. Keep it up =]

natz x0x

Great poem, very realistic, well done, a lot of people including me, can relate to a poem like this..

Very nice.
If it doesn't bother you any more, why walk with your head down?

Don't listen to the others, they are obviously not out to see the real you, and thus, do not matter.

Kalika

I like it very diffrent and so true...nice job...
Emma 5/5

True, its meanngful, and honest and i lik poems like that. I couldnt reaqlly see anything wrong so well done
xxx

Very relatable...they say the pen is mightier then the sword but the malice that can be put behind rumours and icy stares is sometime incomparable. This was another well written poem different from some of your usual poems. I liked it superbly composed.

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