Damn that's cool! And it really happens, which is so gross! I like the cold tone, there's no passion, which can be very chilling. Well done, keep writing! 5/5
Helen

Very different from what you write - but it held a lot of meaning.

i really enjoy reading your work.

good luck and peace
shobhana

I love anything that shines a light on the hypocrisy hidden by people in so many different areas of life!!! nice flow and descriptive as hell!!