Honest? It was excellent. The repitition really gives the poem that bit more er . . . something? It's so hard to explain! I really liked it, 5/5

Peace. [Sole]

Very serious in the begining, but the last line i thought was funny. :)

Sometimes i read a poem and i think, mm, its a little boring, because i've seen so many like them, but your poems are unique and different and i love reading them. well done
xxxx