Hard life

by Hannes   Mar 22, 2006


You and me
So close and yet so far
A mirror breaks in 1000 pieces
I wake up with nothing left
than the darkness
surrounding me
being empty
life goes on only half as fast
try to life without the thing you love the most
is the greatest torture
but life goes on
hard as it is

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hannes

    Lol funny way to say it but I think you are right its not my best one :)

  • 18 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    I gave this a {4/5} because Its very choppy. I dont know, I mean it could just be me, but I feel that poety should flow like silk...This is more like muslin. >.<

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hannes

    Ooh a 2 for the feelings of pain that I write down... it hurts

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