Ooh a 2 for the feelings of pain that I write down... it hurts

I gave this a {4/5} because Its very choppy. I dont know, I mean it could just be me, but I feel that poety should flow like silk...This is more like muslin. >.<

[PygmyPuff]

Lol funny way to say it but I think you are right its not my best one :)