There was a girl in a class below me that died in 04, her name was Lizzy. She was a friend of mine, I think about her all the time.

how did Derek die? Lizzie was ran into a tree.

some possible titles- I try to blend the subject of the poem with important words in the poem.

1. Concrete blood
2. Death Diploma
3. Sea of blood and tears

I don't think they are great titles, but hey I tried....

I like this one good write i give you 5/5 also i like the poem title sea of blood and tears that would go well