Comments : Fantasy

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    This is good. it flows well and the rhyming is good. but the repetition of the phrase in the middle, makes it seem more like a song.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Better flow but the repetition is a bit too much. Try and limit it to one or two. And maybe you should take a break from rhyming.

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelly

    I really like this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelly

    I really like this poem