by Robert Gardiner Mar 22, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Aphrodite, bliss, be thy name!!! |
by HansRik
Excellent Quatern, Robert. You always manage to use words to suit your style. Your use of diction, and imagery, as well as of other literary resources never ceases to impress me. Well done mate! |
by Ariana
I liked this, I liked the words you chose and the upbeat feeling to it. Everything also flowed well, and the rhyming adds to this. I can never quite get this form of poetry and what i noticed in this was that although the line is repeated, each time it is written in a different way so it doesn't sound monotonous. Kudos to you :) |
by PS
This is fantabulous. i love it. the words and the imagery. its just awesome. |
by lauren.
Truly amazing my friend. |
by maria shaw
Very clever.........and well thought, i could read your poems all day. |