Very well done. Such an elegant piece. Great job as usual.

Beautifully w0rded.

Beautiful. Great poem and nice work! 5/5.

Oh, and thanks for the comment on my poem. =]

Haha there is someone else up there called Chelsey too.

--Chelsey

Wow! beautiful!....lovely words.....
fantastic job dear! 5/5

Very clever.........and well thought, i could read your poems all day.

Truly amazing my friend.
I give double snaps to you for sophistication.

This is fantabulous. i love it. the words and the imagery. its just awesome.

I liked this, I liked the words you chose and the upbeat feeling to it. Everything also flowed well, and the rhyming adds to this. I can never quite get this form of poetry and what i noticed in this was that although the line is repeated, each time it is written in a different way so it doesn't sound monotonous. Kudos to you :)

Excellent Quatern, Robert. You always manage to use words to suit your style. Your use of diction, and imagery, as well as of other literary resources never ceases to impress me. Well done mate!