My own sorrow

by David Marshall   Mar 22, 2006


My hearts about to stop,
my souls about to die.
My feelings all come out,
and I break down to cry.

I tried to end my life,
I tried to overdose.
My friends wouldn't let me,
but damn I was close.

I thought I had nothing,
no one that would care.
I thought I had no one,
no love in which to share.

I went outside to breath,
to catch myself some air.
My hearts been waiting for someone,
but no one was ever there.

I thought if I was patient,
I thought if I would wait,
that my sorrow would disappear,
and have a happy fate.

There's nothing more to do,
I'm beyond repair.
She cried as well,
I guess it's only fair.

I'm tired of all this pain,
I don't know what to do,
I don't know what to believe,
I don't know what is true.

I would like to make this work,
I would like to fix this all.
But my path leads no where,
down this empty hall.

I wish I was with you,
right here and now.
I wish to cure this all,
but I wonder how.

I don't want to say goodbye,
because I'm not leaving.
I don't want to miss you,
I don't want more grieving.

No one can understand.
No one can comprehend.
What happens next?
When will this pain end?

I say goodbye to the ground below.
I say goodbye to the stars above.
but you will always stay,
in my heart full of love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    Sad but well expressed
    an amazing write coming from the heart
    the piece has something that pulled me to read it from the begining to the very end
    brilliant i will say

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Aw i can totally relate. this is so sad:( amazing work, yet again

  • 18 years ago

    by 111308

    Yet another astounding poem written by you....Amazing....Yet so sad....if you ever need anyone to talk about problems you can always private message me on p&q im always here to help ppl:D....anyways this was my favorite stanza:
    I went outside to breath,
    to catch myself some air.
    My hearts been waiting for someone,
    but no one was ever there.

    I loved it,it was beautiful! great write 5/5 i enjoy reading your poems your going on my favorites
    love,
    steph*xthesetearsfalldownlikerainx*

  • 18 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Hey this was a very good poem as well.....

    "I went outside to breath,
    to catch myself some air.
    My hearts been waiting for someone,
    but no one was ever there."

    I love those lines from this poem, I know how that feels.....ok take care!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    Awww. i absolutely LOVED the last stanza soooooo cute.. and sad

    I say goodbye to the ground below.
    I say goodbye to the stars above.
    but you will always stay,
    in my heart full of love.

    ^^ WoW amazing. it put such a better impact on it 5/5

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

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