by To Love and Be Loved Mar 23, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Acid tears stream down my face |
by amandalynn
I love that poem..it's deep and it's exactly how i feel..love it |
I hope that poetry is an outlet that is helping you deal with your pain. Strong start...lost its fire towards the end. |
I hope that poetry is an outlet that is helping you deal with your pain. Strong start...lost its fire towards the end. |
Hmmm... saw you were from nz so i thought id check you out... your writing is powerful with a great ending... yet i feel it was a bit weak in verse 3 |
Erm...wow...I'm sure if I'm used to your style but its interesting....some powerful phrases...but feel as if I'd only scratched the surface of it...it somewhat lacked depth? |