Woah, that sounds so cool, the words just sound awesome together, sad subject, but i totally know what you mean. good job.
stay strong
ashes

Wow this is very strong i love it .. thanks 4 commenting on my poem i love ur style all my love xxxxxx

Dude i totaly connect to dat
thats for comentin on ma stuff
i wish i cud rite like u mwa xoxo

Omg i totally wish i could vent out poetry like that. good one alyssa you are one funny poet. have fun bleeding to death all you stupid people.