Sunlit Skies

by Andy   Mar 23, 2006


-Sing it! Its a song! You can see the rhythm I'm sure.-

Do you wanna see inside of me?
The core of my corrosion...
Nothin seems the same of late,
Pre-requisite Explosions...
Princess please keep dreaming of,
Things that entertain you,
These are my thoughts of late,
I hope they don't rub off on you.

Sunlit skies apon darkened eyes,
Somehow defeats the object...
Scream aloud to ease your pain,
If you think you're perfect...
But I don't care who you see,
Scratching on the surface,
These are my dreams of late,
Raise your head an accept your fate.

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  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    I like this a lot. You don't see many poems on PaQ..mainly because it's a poem site..but whatever.

    Maybe you changed the last line because it seems to fit perfectly to me.

    Great job, I don't know if I found out more than what was intended, but this line "
    Sunlit skies apon darkened eyes,
    Somehow defeats the object..."

    Seems to have the most meaning in the whole poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lilly

    Touching. i reeeeeeeaaally wanna hear the song! if you have the notes to it or something on your computer could you e-mail em' to me maybe? red_hot_680@hotmail.com

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    &You know. If you miss me.
    You should get on chat more often :[x

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    OH I WANT YOU TOO ANDY.
    Don't miss me DEAR.
    There's not much to misss ;x
    My pole, feels violated :]x

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    The last line doesn't fit! Omg it's bugging me because the poem/song is awesome but does rely and have that great rythm throughout it...shame to drop it on the last line?Anyway..nice poem;)
    xoxox

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