Wow, that's really good!!! It relates so well to how I feel right now. Gr8 poem, keep writing. ~Kaley~

Ahh!!wicked poem, it has jealousy, love, hate,loss, familiarity, confusion and all the emotions you could possibly want to read about in a poem, its great, kick ** poem me lad x)

take care xxx

"Just the sight of you makes everything hurt
Just to the sound of you stops my heart
Just the thought of you makes me sick
Inside, I'm so torn apart"

thats my favourite part of it, it captures the tension of the feeling well!!

I love this!

Wwoooooow!! you have so much depth you had me feeling your pain! wow seriously! goood job!