Nice sweetie..good continuation although very sad.
Personally i don't think it makes a lot of sense as a suicide letter..because you say you don't really want to die...maybe it's just a different view, a different way you're feeling.
I hope this isn't at all true...please learn to appreicate life, you have so much to offer.
much love xoxo

Hey this is nice too, nicely continued, the flow is still on.

all the best and take care

It was a great poem and i love your work//keep it up :P

This is a very beautiful poem keep it up.please rate and comment mine thank you

I love how it continues. And just because other people may not understand, I do, and it makes total sence. Don't stop writing, your a nature. I love reading your poems, keep it up. Other people see your point of view, don't be afraid to show it

~Brit

Monu,

Remember when i made you go to that jerk councellor and you cried on my shoulder. Im sorry that I put you through that, I will be sorry forever, I wish I could take away your pain, take it for my own shoulders, for you are to good of a person to have such a burden.

you are a wonderful writer, your poems touch my heart,,

love always steph