The poem was different but in a good way, but on a good note i think it needed to rhyme a bit more,
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Thanks for the little help, will do better in the future, glad you liked it

Wow Ben! You do have very deep thoughts! Good job!

This poem hits home for me. My ex is a sniper. This is a powerful poem and shows a sacrifice many wont make

This poem hits home for me. My ex is a sniper. This is a powerful poem and shows a sacrifice many wont make