So wonderful. Nice writing. It's fantastic =) I really enoyed reading this.
Pretty sad though =*( I can tell it came right from your heart!
You asked me what inpired me for the poem "woman of deeds".. Sounds silly but it was my mother.
Often I look around and wonder "how can her life be so easy going" And I see the "wonderfull flowers growing"
But when you look deeper you will see that she's just "watering the seeds with her salty tears" And singing when no one hears.
And I think that is beauty. Not the flowers, but the way she makes them grow.
And when I say "is it a womans duty, to keep the beauty, behind a closed door, for no one to explore?
I don't refer that to flowers. But how she makes them grow. That's the true beauty. And that is often locked behind a closed door.
Anyway, it was a very interesting question =)
Thanks for reading my poem and your sweet commment.