Comments : Why

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    I love this poem!

    So wonderful. Nice writing. It's fantastic =) I really enoyed reading this.

    Pretty sad though =*( I can tell it came right from your heart!

    You asked me what inpired me for the poem "woman of deeds".. Sounds silly but it was my mother.

    Often I look around and wonder "how can her life be so easy going" And I see the "wonderfull flowers growing"

    But when you look deeper you will see that she's just "watering the seeds with her salty tears" And singing when no one hears.

    And I think that is beauty. Not the flowers, but the way she makes them grow.

    And when I say "is it a womans duty, to keep the beauty, behind a closed door, for no one to explore?
    I don't refer that to flowers. But how she makes them grow. That's the true beauty. And that is often locked behind a closed door.

    Anyway, it was a very interesting question =)

    Thanks for reading my poem and your sweet commment.

    You are a very talented writer. I love your work.

    Lotsaaaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-