Still

by Million Tears   Jan 25, 2004


Please read this poem and rate or comment on it. it would really mean a lot to me. thanks.

*~@Still@~*

You took my leather heart,
and shred it all apart.
You took my plastic heart,
and smashed it all apart.
You took my wooden heart,
and cut it all apart.
You took my foil heart,
and ripped it all apart.
You took my glass heart,
and shattered it all apart.
You took my paper heart,
and tore it all apart.
Now, you'd think that I'd be mad,
you'd think that I'd be sad,
you'd think that I can't heal,
well, this is how I feel:
?No matter what you do,
I'll still be here for you.?

*~@Dedicated to my lost love@~*

Please rate this or comment to let me know how I'm doing! don't for get to read my other poems!

*~@8渀~*

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  • 20 years ago

    by nikki

    another great poem, all of your poems are so awesome, i like this style too, with the repitition, good work

  • 20 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    wow great poem, i can rlate to this alot!
    i have voted at a 5, could you please have a look at my new poem (do i.....)
    i would appreciate it very much if you could could comment
    thanks jemma
    xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by ~* Joyful *~

    Another great poem!! I love all of your poems so far.. write some more so i can read em ay.. Keep it up!