by PURE HEART Mar 23, 2006
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
As i find myself surrounded by troubles, |
by Sole
Hmm, I usually give a little comment on the meaning of the poem - but in this case, I'll steer clear of the religion issue . . . The capitals on HIM and HE emphasise those words - showing the poets expression of faith clearly. The flow is excellent, well written. |
by Yasmine
Thank God who gave you the talent to express your faith in Him in this very beautiful poem :) This is one of the the most beautiful poems I ever read, truely :) God bless you and increase your faith and the purity in your heart :) |
Yes, he exists, I believe, although there is so many different god...they r still wot we believe in...good one... |
by sarah
Hun this is fantastic, I love the wording you hav chose and they way it flows perfectly. I have added you to my fav's so keep writing hun sarah x |
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