Life After Death..

by Luke   Mar 23, 2006


Life after death..
Filled with black..
Of wishing and hoping..
You can go back..

There's no fear of death..
You're already dead..
All the blood there is..
Already bled..

There's no waiting..
For tomorrow..
It's just another..
Day of sorrow..

The tears are black..
And the blood is dry..
Each tear stings..
As it seeps through your eye..

Life after death..
So lonely and sad..
The best thing to happen..
Is normally the bad..

Death may seem scary..
But life after is worse..
It's the ultimate..
The ultimate curse..

Life after death..
Is what I'm in..
Will i leave soon..
When will heaven begin?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Monique

    Ok.. wow... thats all I have to say. "wow" im at loss of words right now. Wish i was half as talented as you are hun.
    The tears are black..
    And the blood is dry..
    Each tear stings..
    As it seeps through your eye..
    I love that stanza:)
    Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Deep and sorrowful emotions conveyed wonderfully! Great write :)

  • 18 years ago

    by lOVER

    AHH! freakkin awesome poem. the sentences were short and sweet.

    nice job!!!!
    take care xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    It gives me a cold feeling. You conveyed your thought and feelings wonderfully. I love the dark side approach. Excellent work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylalala

    Wow Luke most of your poems are about Steph and they're so up beat and happy but I like the dark side of your poetry too
    xxKaylaXX

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