Wow Luke most of your poems are about Steph and they're so up beat and happy but I like the dark side of your poetry too
xxKaylaXX

It gives me a cold feeling. You conveyed your thought and feelings wonderfully. I love the dark side approach. Excellent work.

AHH! freakkin awesome poem. the sentences were short and sweet.

nice job!!!!
take care xx.

Deep and sorrowful emotions conveyed wonderfully! Great write :)

Ok.. wow... thats all I have to say. "wow" im at loss of words right now. Wish i was half as talented as you are hun.
The tears are black..
And the blood is dry..
Each tear stings..
As it seeps through your eye..
I love that stanza:)
Keep it up.