Comments : Cuts and Tears?

  • 18 years ago

    by melissa

    I really liked your poem..it reminded me of a friend of mine who use to do that. anyway..great poem your really talented.

  • 18 years ago

    by EM0CHiLD 0F THE DEAD

    I no how you feel i also have scars upon my arm up and down left and rite back and front im ashamed of mine but u cant go back

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Hey! great poem, 5/5
    love jess xXxXxxXxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah Tiernan

    That was really good.... that described every emotion and every thought i have in my mind 24/7 that was awesome plz keep writing and checkj out some of my poems it would mean alot
    Hannah xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Semmie

    It was well written, it reminds me of my boyfriend =)

  • 17 years ago

    by simply crissyboo

    Wow. this is my life in 10 stansas (sp?) incredible poem, just like the other's i've read by you, it blew me away.
    the one thing i didn't like, was

    "My heart though tells the most,
    It tells my reasons
    But every cut I make,
    It is my heart that weakens"

    i just, for some reason think it sounds like its missing something, like the first line doesn't sound like it should be the first line in a stansa. its probably just me though.
    but like i said, its totally my bio.
    great work. xo~Crissy