by krzysiek Mar 23, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
There is something I need you to say, |
Lots of emotion....loved it...love poems are your thing...very well written....5/5! |
Lots of emotion comes out in this one..... you can feel the pain in it, good job |
by LadyPearl
Great job. Try to add more imagery |
by azlan26
"For you I could do everything," This line stood out to me the most, it was like I could have done everything for you...but you wouldn't let me... |
Good progresssion and organisation in this peice, and the expresion is very well protrayed thoughout the entire peice. |