X I Hate You

by Sole   Mar 23, 2006


I hate the way you smile
And laugh all the time
Talking all the while
I'm crying inside

I hate the way you forget
And remember only when it's done
The way you never seem upset
The way you're always having fun

I hate the way you look,
But never meet my eyes
The way you mistook
The truth for all my lies

I hate the way you never listen
The way you talk to me
And when your eyes glisten
Pretending you can't see

I hate the way you fake
That you don't have a clue
I hate the way you mistake
The things I feel for you

I hate the way you act
I hate your every sin
I hate you for a fact
But that's not what I feel within.

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  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Ah. I love this poem. I thought the rhyming was great, and it flowed really well. Also, I quite liked how the emotion just flooded from the words. That's always a good thing.

    The only thing is I noticed what I think is a typo. "Miskate". Should that be "mistake"?

    Still, I liked the piece, so 5/5.

    ``Briana

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was good, well done, it was nice

  • 18 years ago

    by imnotlikethem

    That was so awesome.........I feel that way about someone.........SO GOOD...keep writing sorry it took me a while to look at them...
    xoxo
    Cassie

  • 18 years ago

    by *BeAuTiFuLlY*iNaDeQuEtE*

    Wow. That is really really beautiful, so sad but you worded it really well

    Great job
    love
    XxFeEBeDeExX

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was excelent! Truely was! I like how in each stanza you repeated that same kind of line, the "I hate the way you....."
    It was different, and really good. You had a great rhyming scheme in it, Which was good too. Overall, I just think its fabolous! 5/5
    Oh and i WILL comment more poems tomorrow. Sorry. Im just very tired!

    luv natalie x-x

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