Umm the last line was a bit off
buit the rest
aww
reminds me of contradiction

I loved this poem! i can really relate to it. its great. i would have to say my favorite stanza would be:

I hate the way you look,
But never meet my eyes
The way you mistook
The truth for all my lies

great job! 5/5*

Thats so beautiful...but so sad.
i liked the poem you did well!

take care babe xx

Powerful....sole.....powerful....
You know you have a gift, I remind you everyday...

:)

[lostlaureate- come find me]

The last line did throw me off but otherwise Sole please don't make me repeat myself. You already know what I think of you're writing.

can you please do me a favor, though? It would mean so much to me if you could read Road Of Shattered Glass.

This was excelent! Truely was! I like how in each stanza you repeated that same kind of line, the "I hate the way you....."
It was different, and really good. You had a great rhyming scheme in it, Which was good too. Overall, I just think its fabolous! 5/5
Oh and i WILL comment more poems tomorrow. Sorry. Im just very tired!

luv natalie x-x

Wow. That is really really beautiful, so sad but you worded it really well

Great job
love
XxFeEBeDeExX

That was so awesome.........I feel that way about someone.........SO GOOD...keep writing sorry it took me a while to look at them...
xoxo
Cassie

It was good, well done, it was nice

Ah. I love this poem. I thought the rhyming was great, and it flowed really well. Also, I quite liked how the emotion just flooded from the words. That's always a good thing.

The only thing is I noticed what I think is a typo. "Miskate". Should that be "mistake"?

Still, I liked the piece, so 5/5.

``Briana