Hey this was really good. My favorite part was this one: with one tear it seems so distant,with one scream
it seems so relaxed.That part really got my attention. LOVED LOVED LOVED it now i have to go back and rate it. THANKS FOR READING MY POEMS. happy writing! Be CrEaTiVe!

Wow karli i 2 really liked this poem and it was good. Awesome
xxKaylaXX

Wow. thats sad. Your a wonderful Poet and should keep up the great work. =D