Don't Make Me Suicidal

by lonelynow   Mar 23, 2006


Every bite I take
Deepens every scar I make
Tears dripping down my wrists now
While all around falls scarlet snow

My blade is calling
Why would I resist?
Scarlet ribbons draped casually
Over my pale white wrist

Thick blood, thin blood
It's all the same
It all soothes me
Easing my pain

When Ana fails me
To my blade I turn
Teach me my sins
I want to learn

When life fails me
As everything does
I'll turn to my blade
For one final buzz

My last journey
To that drawer
My last breathe
For evermore

So Ana don't fail me
Make me like you
Able to run along cobwebs
Without disturbing the dew

*When I started writing I had so many feeling trapped inside, I needed to get them out. Instead I've written a poem which contains none of the feelings I started with. The title is wrong. Just wrong. This poem is a failure, just like me. Please comment anyway, please. I always return the favor to all xxx*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    You are not a failure! dont say that! you shouldnt think so poorly of yourself! your poems are amazing!

  • 18 years ago

    by brkendown

    I love the reathem and how it brings memeories to your mind (or for me it does) keep up the work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    WOW!!! thats excellent, good job and keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    I disagree, this poem is not a failure and either r u!! I loved it, keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Everyone is right i would have to say. Don't ever put yourself down. Hey you made a mistake but that doesn't mean you are a failure at all. It's just the fact that you were feeling all these emotions and stuff inside of you. You weren't ready to let them out. And it's understandable. I haven't let my feelings really out yet. But i'm gonna do that really soon in a poem. Just be careful. Everyone cares and loves you in here. but anyway An amazing poem. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

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