Dont put yourself down like that. the poem you wrote flowed excellently and you had a good structure and storyline.

so feel good about the poem you wrote. its sad but really good x)

and you're not a failure. from my point of view , you arent.
keep your chin up! if you ever need someone to talk to just message me alright?
take care.. xx

Great poem and I agree with Serena! Do not put yourself down! I know how it feels, you should read my poem Cuts and Tears, I think that you would take an interest in it! Much love! Email sometime if you need to talk! 5/5

-Steph-

Nice job 5/5
-Vino

This reallly was a great poem and I agree with Serena and Sick of Tears this poem really was great I loved it!
But dont feel bad about the things you write because its a way we all feel sometimes even if it doesnt come out the way we intended and if you need someone to chat with im always here ^_^

Everyone is right i would have to say. Don't ever put yourself down. Hey you made a mistake but that doesn't mean you are a failure at all. It's just the fact that you were feeling all these emotions and stuff inside of you. You weren't ready to let them out. And it's understandable. I haven't let my feelings really out yet. But i'm gonna do that really soon in a poem. Just be careful. Everyone cares and loves you in here. but anyway An amazing poem. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I disagree, this poem is not a failure and either r u!! I loved it, keep it up :)

WOW!!! thats excellent, good job and keep it up

I love the reathem and how it brings memeories to your mind (or for me it does) keep up the work!

You are not a failure! dont say that! you shouldnt think so poorly of yourself! your poems are amazing!