True love from the first moment

by Tripp   Mar 23, 2006


From the Moment i met you,

I knew our love would be true.

that you would be my one and only,

the one i would look to when im lonely.

look into your eyes and tell you truthfully

that youre the entire world and more to me

hold you in my arms and never ever let go

i\'m not going out with you for show, this love is true

its a feeling entirely new to me

without you life would never be

the same

it would be dull boring and lame

ive written this for you to try to tell you

that i love you...more than you can ever EVER imagine

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    It needs tightening up...add some structure..colourful language...show your emotions in a more interesting way....what makes this love poem a million times better than the others on this site? Just somethings to think about but it was a generally well written poem....I know you can do better though...

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I lvoe the sincerity in this poem..the wya it flowed and was as if you were speakign directly to her..way to share ur feleigns nad yess i think notoriosu is in big smalls ong..please read more if u can.thnxs and i WILL do the same.

    lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    This is really sweet its simple but the i can tell you really meant it so well done :d xx ALLY xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    I kno i should fix those simple things, but you can understand it. if its the difference between well and well(we'll) ill obviously put in the punctuation...but yeah. thanks for the tips and stuff. ill remember them the next time i go to post something

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Maybe you should fix the somple things like youre to you're and so forth. Also the lines didn't exactly sound like they stood out which should be important. You want people to remember your poems right :) But it was really good and heartfelt.