Wow luke and angela i liked it. I loved the 2 seperate points of view of life all mixed together in one poem... cool idea and it worked
xxKaylaXX

I love the idea of this poem, very creative! Great job Luke and Angela, awesome collab! ;o)

It was wonderful working with you on this write Luke........ we should do another sometime! You pick a topic and I'll write with ya...... I think this turned out pretty good for it being our first collab.... Love ya!!