Omg! I absolutely LOVED this poem. Especially the ending lines! Brilliant. Simply brilliant.

-T. Jane

Really Great poem! I loved this so much. I'm going to start trying those sonnet poems.

~JaS~ ...5/5 ;)

Oh yea, and I love the title of this too ;) It's really creative.

Marvellous ending

i liked it so much

Nice title....nice poem