Becky must be som special, and very lucky, girl. I enjoyed reading this so much and don't really know anything to add to that so I'm going to vote and hope to see you write more :)

Great ending to the poem, you melted my heart, your a very talented poet. Keep writing :)

WOW i can tell u love her..just take it slow n continue to let your hearts guide you.

I love the rhyme and I can tell shes' one BLESSED gurl...thnxs for commening on some of my poems, woudl you mind reading even more? Liek Suicidal Romance, Sw33t Misery, Another Round, Underneath Me, I can't see your pop-culture, my teddybear n what ever els.e..all my styles are diff. so if u get a chance to read them ALL thatd be great...i will comment on all and ur in my favs also u r good n i cant wait to read more.

ur friend
Lissa